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Emily Y, 8th - California
Long ago, the Jade Emperor decided to hold a great race across the wide river. The first twelve animals in the kingdom to finish would forever have a year named after them. i. Because there was nothing for me. Because I’m haunted by the bitter taste of betrayal, the sting of being out-slyed. When the children read the legends, they’ll find the confident reason why “Never again will Cat and Rat race side by side.” ii. Bright red banners line the city, proclaiming “The Jade Emperor’s Zodiac Race.” We cover the whispering streets, yearning for a spot among the twelve. There are things in this world that can promise full stomachs for life: coins earned by a family each week, a last name etched in the emperor’s golden scroll, and a medal around your neck at the end of this race. Instead of watching below, fighting for the scraps nobody else wanted, Rat and I share a dream of one day eating first. iii. The long river glimmers ahead, glory peeking behind the layered mountains. Rat and I step forward, two of many that line the starting point. The emperor waves his flag, and everyone sets off. We run and run, past mountains of evergreen trees and fields of dewy grass. Three hours later, we reach the long, raging river. The waves roar like hungry lions, ready to devour those too little to cross. iv. Years ago, I was almost eaten by a rabid bear. In the water, my wet fur dragged me down As I faced rows of teeth, dirty with half-eaten fish. His ballistic eyes pinned me still as I submerged deeper into the rocks below. I tell Rat, don’t swim, the waters are starving. Just as our hope fades, the mighty ox strolls by like a thousand dumplings presented to a ravenous man. Some call tricking a gullible boat cheating, but we call it getting a ride. Steady and strong on the ox’s back, a full stomach will soon be my future. v. I smell victory. I feel victory. I—SPLASH! vi. I p l u n g e into the s h i v e r i n g river The cold water drenches my whiskers and paws. Steam fills my ears, Embarrassment fills my eyes, And hatred fills my heart. iv. I’ve always believed that it’s never too late to finish what’s started. But today, even though I sprinted and sprinted like never before, the race shattered in my hands like a once-broken vase. My paw floats just one centimeter from the line. BANG! The gates slam shut. The twelve victors are called: Rat, Ox, Tiger, Rabbit, Dragon, Snake, Horse, Goat, Monkey, Rooster, Dog, and Pig. When children read the legends, they’ll find the confident reason why “Never again will Cat and Rat race side by side.” Comments are closed.
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AuthorsStudents 6th-12th Grades month
June 2026
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